|
Post by kazi15 on Sept 10, 2011 21:30:06 GMT -5
Something that I forgot to say earlier, if Franc's fascinated with all of the technology he sees, the plane ride itself must have been one interesting experience.
|
|
luseylottay
Member
Sexy Flea Monster
... *chirps happily*
Posts: 413
|
Post by luseylottay on Sept 10, 2011 22:20:35 GMT -5
Oh my god he loved the plane ride so much, I never got to write about it for some reason though >.< The main reason he's so amazed by all of it is because Lucille mainly tried to keep him away from the outside world (well they sorta wanted to kill him so yeah). He knows about TVs, Computers, Cell phones, etc, but he doesn't really prefer them, especially when he's got his guitar >w<
|
|
|
Post by kazi15 on Sept 10, 2011 22:35:45 GMT -5
Hey, well, there's always the ride back. Or you could just do it later. It's fine with me if you never get around to it. And that sounds pretty true to me. He's a simple anthropomorphic flea, our Franc.
|
|
luseylottay
Member
Sexy Flea Monster
... *chirps happily*
Posts: 413
|
Post by luseylottay on Sept 10, 2011 23:37:05 GMT -5
Chapter Two, now introducing ME, and my beautiful dog >w< -shot- Now with towels, white boards, and Franc being his cute chirpy self. There are "spoilers" about Francœur as a character in this, so read at your own risk! Attachments:
|
|
|
Post by kazi15 on Sept 11, 2011 0:11:26 GMT -5
I'm not ashamed to say that I squealed a bit when I saw you updated. Not gonna lie. This still looks good, and the introduction was handled well. Franc's gonna have hand cramps when he's done writing everything, though. At least it gives him a chance to practice translating between french and english. Your dog is adorable, btw.
|
|
kcobsessionftw
Member
My Ability to Obsess Surpasses All Others
Obsessing over stuff since 1995!
Posts: 43
|
Post by kcobsessionftw on Sept 11, 2011 0:40:50 GMT -5
...I was about to go to bed before I saw this, but now I must stay up and think about how adorable and amazing this was. 'Twas amazable (or would that be adorazing?). Either way, PURE. WIN.
Also, I squealed. literally. I literally squealed. Out loud. ReallyReally loudly. That is how excited you made me. I must applaud you, my dear.
*ClapClapClapClapClapClapCLAPFOREVER*
|
|
luseylottay
Member
Sexy Flea Monster
... *chirps happily*
Posts: 413
|
Post by luseylottay on Sept 11, 2011 10:33:12 GMT -5
|
|
beccawolf16
Member
"From this angle, she's an angel."
Posts: 91
|
Post by beccawolf16 on Sept 11, 2011 11:55:50 GMT -5
Aw, very nice start to a fanfiction, you write Francoeur so adorably! I like how he uses the whiteboard to communicate, it's a good solution. I'm excited for more!
|
|
comique
Member
Love born from song
Can never post anything right the first time.
Posts: 298
|
Post by comique on Sept 12, 2011 18:16:44 GMT -5
AHJFIUDCHSFJIEUGOJVHDNICUHKSCJNSV!!!!! >//////<
*has no words to describe how excited I am*
Oh wait, here's one
|
|
luseylottay
Member
Sexy Flea Monster
... *chirps happily*
Posts: 413
|
Post by luseylottay on Sept 12, 2011 20:10:48 GMT -5
AHJFIUDCHSFJIEUGOJVHDNICUHKSCJNSV!!!!! >//////< *has no words to describe how excited I am* Oh wait, here's one Excuse me while I go try to find something to get air back in my lungs
|
|
spiralrobot
Member
La seine et moi
Extralucide quand tu est sur
Posts: 52
|
Post by spiralrobot on Sept 19, 2011 23:30:06 GMT -5
Oh, this is awsome! I just read both chapters and now wish that I had seen this yesterday when I was in desperate need of a new fan fic for this movie xp. I love how you wrote Francoeur, he sounds so cute and innocent with his little chirping!
|
|
luseylottay
Member
Sexy Flea Monster
... *chirps happily*
Posts: 413
|
Post by luseylottay on Sept 24, 2011 19:52:53 GMT -5
Chapter.... I think this is Three, is up! Remember to delete the last version of this that you have if you've been reading this already. Sorry if it seems to cut off strangely, I was having trouble finding a way to cut it off ^^; Also, the references to other shows and games... is only the tip of the iceburg >8T Attachments:
|
|
|
Post by kazi15 on Sept 24, 2011 21:05:06 GMT -5
And this was officially the perfect thing to cheer me up [being sick is horrible... ]. I'm loving the whole thing, from the interactions, to the different things you introduce, like Doctor Who. Didn't personally see that episode, but the concept of an alien like that is definitely one that freaks me out. Kinda makes me wonder what he'd think of stuff like Cloverfield... And dragons just made this ten times better for me, just saying [fellow dragon-lover?].
|
|
luseylottay
Member
Sexy Flea Monster
... *chirps happily*
Posts: 413
|
Post by luseylottay on Sept 24, 2011 21:12:56 GMT -5
And this was officially the perfect thing to cheer me up [being sick is horrible... ]. I'm loving the whole thing, from the interactions, to the different things you introduce, like Doctor Who. Didn't personally see that episode, but the concept of an alien like that is definitely one that freaks me out. Kinda makes me wonder what he'd think of stuff like Cloverfield... And dragons just made this ten times better for me, just saying [fellow dragon-lover?]. I. LOVE. DRAGONS. (I'll post up the pictures of the dragons on my shelf... there may or may not be a little Alphonse figurine up there as well >w>) And The Weeping Angels are horribly scary, just go find the episode, you won't be sorry (unless you're easily scared like poor Franc ;3) And sorry to hear you're sick! (I just noticed I always reply to comments last to first o-o;)
|
|
beccawolf16
Member
"From this angle, she's an angel."
Posts: 91
|
Post by beccawolf16 on Sept 24, 2011 21:25:18 GMT -5
This chapter.... I love it! I love Aurelia (which is weird for me because I'm usually skeptical of fancharacters and the like), probably because she reminds me of myself. A bit nerdy, a dragon lover, and artist. The description of her room is nice, and it makes things sound more interesting. It also gives Francoeur a bunch of things to be curious about. Keep writing, I can't wait to see more!
|
|