luseylottay
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Post by luseylottay on Sept 9, 2011 20:31:54 GMT -5
Err, ah... I don't know how I'll be able to explain this one @-@ This actually started off as this crazy idea of What-if-A-Monster-In-Paris-took-place-in-modern-days. I even got around to drawing Francoeur in this totally awesome modern outfit (the basic hoodie, comfy pants, and Converse shoes XD) Then came the idea of Franc learning to play X-Box (which WILL happen, and it'll be LFD2 he'll be playing ;3) ANYWAYS. This is sorta-kinda self insertion (egads, not in the romantic way! Honestly if I met Franc acting as Franc and not Stage-Franc, I'd totally treat him like a kid my age. "Dude, Bro, etcetc" YesIusethosetermsdealwithit) So ah, I'll write some more in a bit, it's scanner day (which means an art spam lol). By the way, Other concepts I'll let you in on for Franc in a modern form (in spoiler form since they're based on character "spoilers") Franc's probably going to borrow an iPod, which will provide him with like, hundreds of songs. He can only verbally communicate with song, right? Easy solution, iPod full of songs. Sing lyrics to communicate.
His easier solution to this is a whiteboard with clip on marker. He can write exactly what he's trying to say without the trouble of finding a song or tune. Upper arms for whatever, lower arms for the whiteboard/marker 8U I still feel like a psycho creep for writing this xD Attachments:
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Post by kazi15 on Sept 9, 2011 20:47:19 GMT -5
Don't be! I think it's great that people are taking this kind of a spin on the idea! And you're doing it pretty well, have you written before this? Is this going to be continued, or will that be it?
EDIT: Just wondering, since the fanfic that I'm writing right now has a touch of the spoilers in it, does that mean I should post it out here, or just slap a warning label on it? And don't worry about the self-insertion thing, I think that could be interesting to look at, and I'd definitely read it.
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Post by luseylottay on Sept 9, 2011 21:42:27 GMT -5
Don't be! I think it's great that people are taking this kind of a spin on the idea! And you're doing it pretty well, have you written before this? Is this going to be continued, or will that be it? Aww, thank you >w< I actually have written a lot before this story, shameless fanfictions that were more of my way of developing story style than anything else xD This is definitely going to be continued, I just wanted a little bit of feedback first ^^ Maybe even some ideas on what I should put into it (Amusement Parks? Conventions? Cool stuff that they may not have had in 1910 xD)
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Post by kazi15 on Sept 9, 2011 22:17:36 GMT -5
The amusement park sounds like an interesting idea [don't think Francoeur would get motion sickness though, how would a flea even get sick?], but the convention would is also a good idea, given that he could be mistaken as one of the people wearing costumes, and get thrown into a lot of different, and funny, situations. Either way, it's up to you.
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Post by luseylottay on Sept 9, 2011 22:28:07 GMT -5
Honestly I'm sure Franc would be dragging me onto roller coasters if I took him into an amusement park... And I have a terrible fear of falling. I took one look at The Superman at Six Flags and just went. "... LOL NOPE" The convention one would be sooo much fun too! just imagine the poor guy getting crowded by crazy otaku XD
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Post by kazi15 on Sept 9, 2011 23:20:11 GMT -5
Yeah, he'd probably be all curious about what they do, though I'm not sure how much he'd like them, personally. [goes to mull on that a bit] I hate the ones that flip you around, do loop-de-loops, and generally make you forget which side is right-side-up. Though I honestly think he'd like Ferris Wheels, but that's just me. And the worst part of it is, he couldn't exactly tell them to back off without some outside help. [RUN AWAY, FRANCOEUR, RUN!!!]
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Post by siffyleafylav on Sept 10, 2011 7:11:31 GMT -5
I don't know what happened, but I CAN"T OPEN THE FILE!! I'm ridiculously egear to read other people's ficcys and whatnot -i love to READ AND WRITE MOST-\
BUT it WON"T OPEN!
HELP!
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Post by luseylottay on Sept 10, 2011 9:28:04 GMT -5
I don't know what happened, but I CAN"T OPEN THE FILE!! I'm ridiculously egear to read other people's ficcys and whatnot -i love to READ AND WRITE MOST-\ BUT it WON"T OPEN! HELP! I saved it as an odt file. That might be why ^^; Here I'll change it to a doc file for you then it should be readable
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Post by luseylottay on Sept 10, 2011 9:30:36 GMT -5
Here we are, Here's the .doc file! Attachments:
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Post by kcobsessionftw on Sept 10, 2011 11:01:26 GMT -5
I am LOVING this Lusey! 'Twas perfection!...Well, aside from a few grammatical errors, but that's nitpicking, so ignore that.
I especially love the pics you posted of hoodie!Franc on Deviantart. I died and then came back to life from the overload of cute.
Pleasepleaseplease continue this. I and the rest of the fanbase will worship you for it.
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Post by luseylottay on Sept 10, 2011 11:24:49 GMT -5
Ahu~ <3 Thank you >w< The hoodie Franc was really that cute to you? 8,D
I'll be sure to continue it~
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Post by kcobsessionftw on Sept 10, 2011 11:44:57 GMT -5
That would be the biggest "OUI!" ever my dear madamoiselle! He looks all nervous and modern and adorkable and whatnot. The hoodie and all that reminds me of my kindofsortof bf's clothes, and that just adds to the "awww" factor.
Continuation of this fanfic must commence immediately, by order of the Obsessive One!
...Also I am sorry if I ramble and come off as bossy; I am trying to stop.
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Post by siffyleafylav on Sept 10, 2011 11:45:09 GMT -5
CONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUE-I love this, can you notice?-CONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUE
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Post by comique on Sept 10, 2011 15:23:04 GMT -5
... I love you! Forevers! :'D I can tell this modern day Franc and Lucille is going to be a GREATAMAZINGEPIC story OF AWESOME! ಠ_ಠ Over reaction, I’m sorry. But really, I want to see MOAR! :3 I have a question though, what's Franc wearing to cover his face in the airport? I don't think a mask would work in public and just a hood isn't fooling anyone.
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Post by luseylottay on Sept 10, 2011 16:29:43 GMT -5
All this positive feedback >w< My god Imma ASPLODE FROM HAPPY
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I ah, just figured he'd keep his head down, the hood itself is designed to be large, enough that he can at least cover up his mandibles ^^;
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